# Waiting Poem by Seema Aarella

# Waiting

Rating: 5.0


Alone I fought, its battles till now
When peace returned I looked for love
Flowery carpets and destinations new
Awaits me…but I wait for you!

Long and lonely trip I can’t make
Time and seasons passed without break
I stood there longing to see your smile
Wanting your company to walk this mile!

Winced as castles opened their doors
Fretted to step on those marbled floors
For you I am waiting devotedly so
If heaven calls, I would say no!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aijaz Asif 22 September 2008

an amazing write indeed with lot of yearning in it....i loved it 10....thanks

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Antonio Liao 24 September 2008

yah! ... such a lovely word to hear... waiting is always be the call of time..when everytihng is ripe...it flows to the flows of nature..waiting no more... for everything will be returning to the beginning.... very nice poem i love it... thank you... Seema a 10/10

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Raj Nandy 25 September 2008

A good poem Seema! Hope your waiting will get rewarded soon. -Raj Nandy

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Rishi Menon 09 November 2008

I was utterly shocked when I read this... for I wrote something along these lines (and misplaced it a long while ago) ... but your words are much more beautiful and apt what can one expect with a master craftsman at work? well done seema.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 21 October 2008

Your way of writing love is enthralling. write aw many as you can to enthuse people. you may think of posting your image in your profile, to be more be fitting to readers.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 03 October 2008

10 for this marvelous poem. Love it.

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Aiswarya. T.anish 01 October 2008

GOOD WORK.I LIKE THIS POEM.KEEP WRITING.BEST WISHES

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Strong and beautiful end, dear poet Seema. You really love! You deny heaven and marbles, cause for you love is the ideal. Thanks for sharing I give you a 10+. Bravo Joseph Josephides Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded

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