A lesson learned in the army
Which, I’m sure, is not out of date
Was neither soothing or balmy
But was how to “hurry and wait”
We waited in lines for our chow
Spam really not worth waiting for
Would never wait that long now
Don’t know why we waited before
We waited in lines for our shots
From needles as long as the lines
Our arms looked like bloody ink blots
Red grapes growing out on their vines
We wanted escape from the brass
We needed release from their clutch
We waited in lines for that pass
That pass we needed so much
We waited in lines for inspections
Inspections of all different sorts
The doctors looked for infections
Or perhaps some imported warts
To go to the bathroom we waited
The army then called them latrines
If you think we weren’t frustrated
You can tell that to the marines
The private awaits his one striping
The P F C waits for his two
The corporal awaits, always griping
Complaining his third stripe is due
The wait that was most universal
The wait that loomed very large
Was the only wait not perverse-al
The wait for our army discharge
It was worth the wait (no pun intended) , for that last stanza is a true payoff! -chuck
Very good read, sir. Hidden under the lighthearted tone is a very heartwrenching truth.
Oh, I cannot imagine what it must be like to be in the military, away, alone, afraid, and not knowing anything for yourself==only to be discharged. I am sorry...but I enjoyed your writing.....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
All I can say about this Stanley, is BRILLIANT! ! ! ! a SUPERB WRITE loved reading every line and it was so down to earth and so funny in parts as to keep it lighthearted, although it was rough going I know. Very well done indeed. Love Ernestine XXX This one is going to my favourite list, for sure!