Wait A Minute Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Wait A Minute

Rating: 4.0


rush
routine
precise
risky

focus
meeting
process
deal

agree
schedule
dead line
hours

target
decision
follow up
responsible

would you like thirstily
to drink a cup of coffee?
would you like hungrily
to eat some sandwiches?

would you like keenly
to hear the tunes of music?
would you like impatiently
to watch commercial breaks?

would you like freely
to climb high mount Fuji?
would you like eagerly
to swim deep the Red sea?

would you like cheerfully
to fly around country Tibet?
would you like enthusiastically
to walk along river Euphrates?

space
spare
spread
breath

fresh
green
garden
fragrance

simple
humble
adorable
gestures

energy
funny
easy
join

no pressure
take a time
take a break
wait a minute

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 07 October 2008

It seems as if you have clinbed inside the head of everyone who labors each day . Then you extracted their thoughts and put them on paper. GW62

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Carol Rhodes 10 September 2008

Whenever I read one of your brilliant works, it's like I'm listening to lyrics accompanied by musical notes. Yes, have you put any of your poems to music? Carol

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 03 September 2008

Fantastic wordings! I like the words used.

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(: God's Wild Child :) 02 September 2008

i like it. keep it up. =)

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Ency Bearis 01 September 2008

having huff and puff in reading the verses, i was exhausted..but wait a minute you did it spellbinding.... Ency Bearis

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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