Wait Poem by Jahan Zeb

Wait

Rating: 4.5


keeping the window open,
sitting on the sill,
holding pen in lips,
looking at the street end,
no one knows me waiting,
someone who hasn't promised,
Yet my dear I am waiting....

Sunday, May 6, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The poem reflex the departure of My wife. She passed away after spending 11 months with me. She cannot come back and has not promised to come back either.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nabila ima 02 November 2012

Who you waiting dear? I lke this but make it more longer and express your feeling.

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Persian Khushi 14 October 2012

Beautiful Jahan. contents of your heart poured. very tragic...

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Farah Ilyas 23 May 2012

wait, wait & wait, thats a word have a power to make anyone destitute & deprived, but valour person always faces the hardships &* tribulations of life with patience & great heart, ur loss will not be fulfilled but u r still waiting..really a touching poem..awesome

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Alex Medina 09 May 2012

I know what it's like to lose loved ones. Life moves on, and so should you. ...of course, it's not exactly the easiest thing to do but still. Anywho, great poem!

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Thomas Duncky 06 May 2012

Yet my dear I am waiting.... This poem is great in the sense that it says more than you could write jahan...its so touchng and the last line has all the power to conjure a tear. Nice write but above all straight from the heart. Thank u.

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Jahan Zeb

Jahan Zeb

Malakand Pakistan
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