Vortex Poem by Elena Sandu

Vortex

Rating: 5.0


Whisper to myself
'I'
and my soul will fly
gazing upon
the seas and oceans.


My whispers says
'You'
and my soul
will roll down
to the core.

Thursday, October 16, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Oneness. Our soul could be, or already is one with everything, maybe huge difference might come from matters of our conscience in motion? Many people praise stillness, yet I wonder is there such think as absolute stillness? I guess not. I guess we just live in constant motion, a rotation that brings us to try acknowledge everything, and everything is brought, to deeper the sense of ' us '.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amitava Sur 05 December 2014

A beautiful feeling of self as how the soul is remaining within so closely and churning like a vortex.

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Ramesh Rai 28 October 2014

Short sweet and beautiful

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* Sunprincess * 20 October 2014

..........perfect title for this poem....love is like a vortex is very imaginative....

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 20 October 2014

Fantastic I and you I stood for self love that is within and you stood for you my love is for you and your love is for me..love rolls like that thank you

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