Vomit In Your Half Filled Cup Poem by Dakota Ellerton

Vomit In Your Half Filled Cup



If love was in the air
you have taken my last breath
not only causing heart ache
but a sevre fatal death

If life was like a box of chocolates
and you don't know what you'll get
then I vomit on your chocolates
this life I do regret

If life were like living in a coffin
the sun keeps peeking through
burning my corpse repeatedly
like the words you choose to spew

If I was like a circle
it's you who made me whole
you emptied me just as fast
It's my heart, I know you stole

If life were truely fair
you and I would be here now
but if we don't keep fighting
this, us, life will not allow

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

'Vomit in your half filled cup'... I know what it's meant to express, but I simply can't stop chuckling when I read it... I'm not being sarcastic; I think it highlights the contrast between the mood of your write and the possibly opposite reaction of people who read it...

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