Void Poem by Crimson Love

Void



I need to fill this void, Abysmal it seems,
So empty, I can never reach the light as it beams,
Taunting and teasing me,
dancing light flying around,
up so high, falling deeper
I am consumed,
The light is gone,
I've seen my last dawn,
Swallowed by Darkness,
Shoving its way through my body,
Gasping for air
the darkness sucks the life from you,
This is what you asked for,
pain was your savior,
your void is has been filled.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tindel Drey 30 September 2011

nice one. looks like a fellow gradually drifting into unconsciousness or getting high on drugs or alcohol.

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Geoffrey Ngoima Ndegwa. 30 September 2011

Uh, man, where do i start? There is sumthing about your this poem that rings so loud in my soul... I think you were meant for this piece

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