Vivid Views Of Love (Collaboration) Poem by Compton Wright
Vivid Views Of Love (Collaboration)
Leland Wright!
Gaining love...the most beautiful thing in the world
We are only squirrels trying to get a nut, a man once said
How can you believe that? How can you stunt? Or be that blunt
Some have bled, led, and some are dead for their lover
The closest you can get to another, just as close as a brother but physical
Love can stumble however, hope arguments don’t rumble forever
You can’t contain love or label it, like a gun can’t be contain with a muffle
Can’t say it enough wife…I love you, hatred floods out draining my blues
Tension I forget to mention, hard to find the one, some women are blocked like fences
Dirty hands of wild parties are clean, drenched, and lovely rinsed
I am the king; you’re the queen, only hope one day we shall have a prince
Of course when time commences, pure example of how love connects
Heart is cleanse with a piercing glow, no longer confined
Can’t stop thanking god I have to get low, I have to kneel, pay homage to the shrine
God is on that wall, without him my love would be blind, to gain love…it takes time
Compton Wright!
Losing Love…one of my worst experiences I have ever felt
From heated arguments leading to horrible heartburn
To heart breaking moments echoing inside your soul
I curse the day I met love at its rawest form, pure despair
I wasn’t fast enough to pass through or to stop the pain
It spread through my body like venom of a rattlesnake
Or better yet battery acid, burning my chest making a hole
In my heart…it weird how love is compared to many great things
But yet is still compared to death, suffering, and unimaginable pain
I hate my mistakes and how my heart cries under the loss of love
Love is my fuel for hatred, my trigger to suicidal death
Love is the reason I still hesitate into true love, but it still brings me tears
Down my face, down my heart, down my soul as it kills me from within
Losing love is like losing a part of me, watching love die through my lens
Love I wish you would be gentle with me instead of try to…
Break me with your words; torment me with your actions and charms
I loved you…you hated me, for my cocky attitude and my confidence
I hope you are happy because I despise you and the purpose you have
You destroy lives, you destroy relationships, and you destroy…me slowly but surely
Love can go to hell; you even took away the one, now I only got her old mittens
I will never forgive you and your friend “lust”, goodbye and good riddance
Man, it iz obvious you guyz are related, because you both did a completely awesome job! ! ! It explained both sides to the story, and you completely blew it away! It was explained amazingly, and I realy do feel for him. Scale 1-10.......15!
you guys are crazy...i did the best lol jk....i respect everyone's opinion this turned out great.
Very well done Men. such great views on love.. there's so much to say but enough paper to write it on.. but great master pieces you have both made..great minds think alike! .. i loved this piece. both you great job. ~ Hazel G.E
Nicely done my brothers, keep up the good work, Best to you both Jon
The poetic Wright brothers.............................move on bros! ! ! ! ! ! !
wow guys! ! ! u two r ramazing writers! ! ! i cant pick which is the best! ! ! ! 10/10 to both of u
I agree with Shelby! You both did an awesome job! It's great to see the comparison on such a strong matter. I love it.: D 10+! ! !
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4/20/2024 1:23:03 AM # 1.0.0.1119
wow you guys were both good his was givin love a chance and ur was so dark and mysterious it was like a ying-yang i loved it he is REALLY good but not as good as u and i can see why its hard to decide but one day he'll get better but dont worry ur still #1 to me