Visiting Hell Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Visiting Hell

Rating: 5.0


I longed to visit hell,
Eager to see and stories to tell,
But I hoped to see it at the earliest,
I thought it may not be good but best,

My eyes stopped and took me by surprise,
Alighted from winged plane to rise,
I wondered and thought step so wise,
One should come here and improvise,

Not bad place to reside,
Leaving all worries aside,
All looked after well,
Nothing to fear like hell,

It is right choice to be here,
Easy to find and not to go anywhere,
All comforts and great souls to meet,
All happily residing and ready to greet,

Why people on earth don’t know it?
You won’t get place even you go with lamp lit,
Do all whatever you can and then come,
Doors 24 hours open and always welcome,

It is little crowed otherwise no problem,
All comforts and stability provided to them,
All fears, long chase and reprisal not here,
Free movement and at will to go anywhere,

I found one notorious soul and asked for comment,
Quick was reply with broad smile” Don’t lament”
People there problematic and hell bent,
We have found this place as heavenly sent,

Don’t be afraid of coming here,
You will not find the good place anywhere,
So we send the message for your happy voyage,
Leave all there for them and bring no luggage,

You will have good beginning and new page,
Freedom from harassment and virtual bondage,
Surrounded by family like strong prison,
Have no say, clear ideas or simple vision

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Not bad place to reside, visit once atleast...10

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Bharati Bhikhubhai 27 July 2009

My eyes stopped and took me by surprise, Alighted from winged plane to rise, I wondered and thought step so wise, One should come here and improvise, one should visit in life time...10

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Ratna Patel 01 August 2009

All comforts and great souls to meet, All happily residing and ready to greet, good place to vist.....10

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Suwarna Patil 16 August 2009

very good place to visit in....10

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Rupa Shah 19 August 2009

must visit once..inlife..10

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Darshna Chopra 06 September 2010

But I hoped to see it at the earliest, I thought it may not be good but best,

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Erica Santana 03 May 2010

I liked this one alot I give it a 10

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warner treuter 30 April 2010

I really don't know. Seems like a simple picture of earth to me, depending on who's there rather than where.

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 24 December 2009

What we see is just the opposite of what it is... Hell is actualy the heaven, and i can see that you know some better part of it. Wonderful words...

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Chaul Vania 10 September 2009

My eyes stopped and took me by surprise, Alighted from winged plane to rise,

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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