Visibly Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Visibly

Rating: 5.0


(dedicated to Mr.Leslie Howard, a great pianist)

The hats
The dogs
The trees
The boats
The ladies

The monkey
The children
The umbrellas
The gentlemen
The social classes

miniature dots
new language
counterpoint
harmony
variation
emotion

perception
heuristics
intensity
color
lines

sad
light
calm
similar
contrary

equivalence
combination
luminous hues
directed upwards
pointing downwards
predominance of warmth

The grass
The water
The faces
The clothes
The activities

The park
The island
The suburb
The landscape
The public garden

(inspired by Seurat's Un dimanche après-midi à l'Île de la Grande Jatte)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 18 December 2008

Don't bend-fold-spindle-mutilate

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Kite Remedy 19 December 2008

It's a simple, yet contains a beautiful meanings.. Well penned...

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Kassem Oude 19 December 2008

I think all those being you mentioned are delirious by the pianist performance, he should be wonderful player. Wonderful piece.

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Subbaraman N V 19 December 2008

Superb crafting is visibly great!

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Chitra - 19 December 2008

visibly well expressed!

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Gargi Saha 07 January 2009

A GREAT PIECE OF PROSE! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Dr Rajesh Kumar Vaid 30 December 2008

Very interesting selection of words!

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Sebastine Humaemo 30 December 2008

nice selection of words......quite different and interesting....thanks for sharing....sebastine...

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Miriam Maia Padua 27 December 2008

very unique piece from a unique you....brilliantly done and successfully put me to read and absorb your words...and savor the meaning of your piece as a whole...its wonderful....it seems I'm in the most beautiful place where everything is there....just like music...everything is there...all the feelings.....10+++++ more power....maia

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Maryam Khan 26 December 2008

Very nice work, I enjoyed this format and your selection of vocabulary. i like the form you have wrote in making it different and unique :) rgrds maryam

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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