R.Benjamin Abate

Rookie - 150 Points (06/22/90 / Mattydale, NY)

Visible Dreams - Poem by R.Benjamin Abate

Innovators at our best
We give ourselves & forget
Get good feelings
Then we impress

The autumn leaves
Changing colors
The grass growing greener
The last door you open

Where you will find Home
Where you will be set free
Nothing costs a thing
Let's put a window in our dreams


Comments about Visible Dreams by R.Benjamin Abate

  • Gold Star - 15,499 Points Lyn Paul (8/30/2013 5:39:00 PM)

    A window in our dreams... A great line... A great write. Thank You (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,446 Points Somanathan Iyer (8/28/2013 11:07:00 AM)

    dreams are mind's natural windows to express our emotions.autumn leaves changing colors yet dreams remain dreams. Nice poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,226 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/23/2013 6:19:00 PM)

    Put a window in our dreams
    Nice way to capture dreams which we always tend to forget. Beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 22, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, August 23, 2013


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