chandra thiagarajan


Visibility - Poem by chandra thiagarajan

A dot
On a pure white apparel
Is instantly visible to the eye.
Like-wise
A wrong thought
On the mind’s apparel
Should immediately be visible to me.


Comments about Visibility by chandra thiagarajan

  • Veteran Poet - 1,258 Points Om Chawla (8/30/2013 10:18:00 AM)

    Truly a wrong thought is usually 'visible' on mind's eye, but do all of us take notice of it and if so how many times. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 18,301 Points Ramesh Rai (8/21/2013 6:03:00 PM)

    mind is the face of a person. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,860 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (8/13/2013 10:55:00 PM)

    Good intention and more than 95% of the population openly declare this statement..Nice to read, CT.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,860 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (8/13/2013 10:55:00 PM)

    Good intention and more than 95% of the population openly declare this statement..Nice to read, CT.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Aswath Raman (8/13/2013 3:08:00 AM)

    And let's hope! The dot is not on a blind spot! Really sesnible write ma'am! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,534 Points Valsa George (8/13/2013 12:50:00 AM)

    From all your writings, it is very apparent that you want to keep your mind' s apparel spotlessly white! Simple and cute with a great message! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,965 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/12/2013 10:34:00 PM)

    Mind’s apparel is always white. Wrong thoughts keep darkening it. Beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 42 Points Adheez Van Der Beanthz (8/12/2013 3:05:00 PM)

    very simply written, but it has a very deep meaning with very strong message and warning
    awesome..! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 211 Points R.j. Wynn (8/12/2013 1:38:00 PM)

    Awesome, and I thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,259 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/12/2013 12:21:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem with deep meaning in it...I too agree with both the comments below...Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,828 Points Kavya . (8/12/2013 11:44:00 AM)

    Wrong thought nicely compared to a dot on a white apparel (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,282 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (8/12/2013 9:59:00 AM)

    The mind's eye can be very deceptive, easily fooled. Care and caution should be exercised. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 12, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 27, 2013


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