Virus #1: Sapphire Feneio Xeniyah (C) 5-11-09 Poem by Zahir Kijani

Virus #1: Sapphire Feneio Xeniyah (C) 5-11-09



A cloned twin who was accepted faster than he was made
Eyes and Hair as white as wool
But skin as Brown as wood
But Darker
Brother of Max who kept track
Of the facts that set Max back
From his sudden attacks
In his Infant stage he was born at the age of fourteen
With the mind of a genius and the body of twenty men
Remembers most of Max’s memories
Solved most of Max’s mysteries
Imagined with surreal imagery
They never really disagreed
His activity was mentally
Creating symphonies with history
Was the replacement for Zerin but was ever closer then any
In love with Brinda Indashu and Zhen Bo Ro Kai
Ricocheted off of many
Saddened by the loss of his love and that of Max’s
His loving anger sent them to Keelaa for a security breach
His loving anger also sent him to the chamber as a brother deceased

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varanasi Ramabrahmam 05 September 2009

An imaginative piece. The subject matter of the poem is more scientific and some more poetic touch may have to be there. Best wishes.

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Ramesh T A 11 May 2009

Future problems of cloning of human beings are difficult to envisage now itself! Brave New World by Aldous Huxley gives a clear picture and your subsequent creative poems may try on that line to visualize the developments in that stages. Thought provoking!

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Zahir Kijani

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