Villanelle On Depression Poem by B. V. Dahlen

Villanelle On Depression

Rating: 4.8


Depression is a fact of life for me.
As much a part of life as food and air,
It hovers like a dreaded entity.

It scatters joys like useless stale debris,
And sews the ashes of my dreams in gloom.
Depression is a fact of life for me.

It poises like a shadowing banshee
With somber wings just waiting to enshroud.
It hovers like a dreaded entity,

And I can almost always guarantee
Secreted in my spectral holidays
Depression is a fact of life for me.

My life becomes a frequent abductee
Purloined by mirthless bird of prey
It hovers like a dreaded entity..

A vulture pouncing when my back is turned,
But hidden, and not easily discerned.
Depression is a fact of life for me
It hovers like a dreaded entity.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
George Krokos 22 December 2017

To reverse the trend, where possible, of an adverse condition or situation one must take certain specific opposite measures with due consideration. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - S.O.#128 © George Krokos 2017

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 July 2017

It hovers like a dreaded entity sews the ashes of my dreams in gloom shadowing banshee A vulture pouncing when my back is tur It hovers like a dreaded entity. Dreaded experience of depression put into words. Very clear and full of feelings you have depicted it dear poetess. thank you for this beautiful fact of a a poem.. liked it very much. thank you again. tony

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B. V. Dahlen 27 July 2017

I appreciate you kind words.

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Spock The Vegan 25 March 2017

Excellent villanelle on depression. I know people with that difficulty. Thank for the inspiration....10

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B. V. Dahlen 27 July 2017

Thank you.

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B. V. Dahlen

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