Ven Vow Poem by aung si myanmar

Ven Vow

Rating: 4.3


Even if one makes me to bleed
Like the blade of dangerous deed,
My belief is just laconic luck.
Sure, I'll reply with loving-kindness.

Even if one gives me big dig
With the lips of terrible trick,
My spirit is just innocent ism.
Sure, I'll reply with compassion.

Even if one boasts me to sizzle
Like the goad of beating cruel,
My moral is just excellent ecstasy.
Sure, I'll reply with prosperity.

Only if one edicts evils to grow
With dander-devils of highest score,
My soul will ignore that goon-guy.
Sure, I'll reply with equanimity mind.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eindaray Kyaw 17 September 2012

Unquestionable truth...Through these four things...you will win everything..

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Zero Ro 18 September 2012

Great poem! But, don't be blinding-kindness, imbecile, dullness and negligence...

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 18 September 2012

The soul of kindness that is growing up in this poem is seeing well. you offer great ways for a global peace. i like the idea that is behind this nice poem well done.

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Philo Yan 18 September 2012

I visualize this poem being recited by Buddha or Mahatma Gandhi. Very deep and eloquently penned.

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Hla Thandarwai 05 October 2012

Good job! if we follow that vows, sure we will get the real peace.Thanks for sharing this.

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So Close 20 September 2012

with small words you expressed the feel beautifully »so close«

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 19 September 2012

Very fine poem, Aung si, which I think also reflects the beauty of Buddhist philosophy. What if all people will do what this poet decides to do, never to retailiate, never to hate but only to give the best to life?

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Sunny Rose 19 September 2012

wow nice poem keep it up aung si you're a great poet

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Poetheart Morgan 18 September 2012

The poem came from a delicate soul but strong! ! ! !

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