Vanishes Away Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vanishes Away



D… erailment

I…internal rift

V..iolent clash

O…ver the honey moon

R…remorse and pain

C…carriage off the track

E …end of relation

What can be other definition?
When ending with bitterness in relation
It is worst crisis
Shrouded with sadness

The love tree collapses
Leaves are at loss
Fruits bear no test
Who will come here and rest?

No one should opt
Separation but co-opt
To live together
And differ

So long union of stay
Vanishes away
In seconds time
To lose face all the times

Tuesday, November 25, 2014
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Michael Walkerjohn 25 November 2014

Aloha Hasmukh.. The depth of profound experiences lay within these words... I, have always kept a packed flight bag in the front foyer... so each time she goes for her coat, or hangs it up... well, you know what I am talking about... Marriages, for the most part, are not, made in heaven... these things must be made by the two participants... and those in-laws! friends and other family members are generally of no help too! For two strong willed individuals to make it through a few years together... well, think of being Cast Aways, on that deserted island... there, the bind of the bond has a chance... Oh... on thing of importance more... by the time she is speaking what she will to you, in that voice... the decision was made many moons before... nice piece of relevant word work... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 November 2014

D… erailment I…internal rift V..iolent clash O…ver the honey moon R…remorse and pain C…carriage off the track E …end of relation

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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