Validating My Erections Poem by Ted Sheridan

Validating My Erections

Rating: 4.4


Seeking any form of validation from the readership
I tend to write on provocative topics, inspired by Fluff Girls
and the early morning hard on I get viewing them
when they flap their collagen injected and painted lips
on the Fox Channel....(Some of those young skirts....
allow you to see all the way to Argentina, to quote Randy Newman)
Providing such masterful strokes that have been known
to evoke Bukowski like moments of bliss...

My titles, I liken to that of sequin pasties
I plaster them tauntingly above my form of prose
Some of these creations have happy endings....
and some end tragically
Like that of my most recent hard on....
Drunk and disorderly, I will tell you I understand your genius even if at that particular moment
I am hitting the Ctrl-alt-esc buttons for relief
I will bleed for you as long as I don't have to give blood
I am not a prophet but a liar like all the rest....
Simply put...
I am seeking any form of validation

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elysabeth Faslund 10 July 2007

This is one funneeee poem! Validation is so hard...to believe, read, and keep as an upstanding pillar of society. Hell with what 'she' will think. Commentary is just that. You certainly didn't need a dictionary for this one! ! ! Now, poor 'Bob', on the other hand...Great! Get validated! ! ! xxElysabeth

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Gregory Collins 10 July 2007

i think i am going to have to start, wonder what she will think? thanks

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Ted, the title reeled me in and boy was I glad to have been caught! This is a remarkably well written, astute, and courageous poem. Of course, I'd expect nothing less than the best from you! Bravo, my friend.

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Bollocks. There you go, some all-round validation. :) t x

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