Valentines Day Poem- Baring It All Poem by Reshma Ramesh

Valentines Day Poem- Baring It All

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Here I am where I never wanted to be,
On the edge of the mountain,
In the depths of the sea,
Baring all that I ever had,
Removing the cloak that I wore,
Going back on the words I swore,
The hood drops from my head
On the floor, my eyes closed
I can feel your mind caress me
Your eyes upon my skin,
I am baring it all baring it all.

As I stand naked in front of you,
Like the sun you shine, rain you pour,
Maybe I did not have to show you,
What I am made of, now I am a putty
In your hands, but the day I let
You love me darling
I bared it all, bared it all
Like the love pure
On this valentine day

reshma

My love, but before I want to kiss you
I want to feel your youth and softness
I want to feel the wet soft skin
To lay you down
And then and then and then
You twist like a climber to a tree
Convulse, moan as I kiss you deep
And again and again and again
I love you
As you stand in front of me
When in the sultry afternoon
I feast my eyes with the line
That puts you together and my hands
As I sculpt you
The long thin legs with the curve
The back like hanging on your slim spine
As I touch the richness of your thighs
As you melt slowly on the edge
And your belly as my fingers move down
The line as you part your legs
The skin as my hands touch
When you push up like tsunami

sdk

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 08 February 2009

Wooooooooooooooooosh! ...Talk about a change of pace, indeed! I can hear the siren-sounds of fire-trucks on route to my place, to extinguish my flaming P.C. wires that your Valentine poem created & fulminated! ! ! Tastefully sensuous! F j R 2009

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Greenwolfe 1962 07 February 2009

Well, this isn't like my Valentine's Day poem. I'll say. This was lovely to read though. The kind of thing that Valentine's are made for. The beauty of a woman, and the touch of her hand. GW62

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Sadiqullah Khan 07 February 2009

In Silence You left the lines blank for me love And again you ask why wrote my plaint When you are in front of me I am lost In the beauty of your hair your lips In the gazelle eyes and the music From the tongue that licks honey When I open my mouth for my words You place your finger on your lips Enter the silence of my love else I leave you in the oblivions vast Like a flute from the reed in silence Wail I long as separated from beloved You make my silence in colors float When in the bloom of spring I enter The garden where nightingale sings In silence sitting by the rose In silence my love I live in thou 7/2/2009

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Tsira Goge 06 February 2009

The sincere passion dominates here, it's nice Valentines dey for you...10... tsira

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 06 February 2009

Wow so much beautiful passion for valentines day...10

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Reshma Ramesh

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Bangalore, India
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