Valentine Without You Poem by lil island Gal

Valentine Without You



In the cold winter night waited I long
For you seeking shelter from the northern storm,
Thought of you filled my head I walk for miles
Just to feel you closer to me and I feel troubled.
Times, tears and fears have just stepped in again
As I see the girls in red their love in black.
Late to night when the entire world is expressing love,
I decide to stay up and think of you.
And I wished on a star that somewhere you are
Thinking of me too.

They say” time heels all wounds,
If that is true, then i guess
Mine go deeper than pain.

There are no words to choose over losing you.
I guess I found out too late, and now all I feel
Is heartbreak that only hurts when I breathe.
The part that hurts me the most is knowing
That I once had you and then lost you…..
You touched my heart with a thousand pleasures
And broke it into million pieces

Why is it easy to fall in love
And yet so hard to be loved back?
Why should i feel such if destiny permits me not?
Why do i have to fall if its you i can’t have?
Why is there a you in me but never a me in you?

I know your ultimate reply would have been
“I don’t know! ! ”

I can’t escape the thought of you.
Even in my dreams you are there.
It’s not fair how you are gone,
And how you are moving on so fast,
While I m still living in the past.
Even when I pour my heart out to you
I m not sure its shows that I love you
More than you will ever know a million words
Would not bring you back, I know because I have tried.
Neither would. A million tears, I know because
I have cried, cried. Cried a lot! !
It’s been raining since you left me,

Now I m drowning in the flood. You see,
I have always been a fighter, but without you.
I have decided to give up.
There is nothing sadder in this life
Than to watch someone you love walk away
After they have left you.
To watch the distance
Between your two bodies expand
Until there is nothing left but empty space ….
And silence.

The greatest distance on earth is north and south,
Its when I m right I front of you and you don’t know
That I still love you they say that if you love someone
You should tell them go,
But they never say what to do
When they don’t come back.
I understand why you had to leave

But I don’t understand why you are not coming back? ? ?
You taught me how to love but now how to stop? ? ?
Come to me honey just to teach me to stop loving you.
It feel like its been years, I last talk to you in our special way.
And now I feel so alone,
May be this meeting will make me not missing you
For a while sweetheart

I was born the day you started loving me
And I dead the day you left me,
But live for the time that you loved me
So I don’t wished to complain god for giving me
The shortest life, in fact I want to thank him
For giving me the most beautiful life.
I know I m dead from inside
But you know why am I still breathing honey? ? ?
Because I am still begging in front of god to give me
My life back.

May be in this lifetime,
I won’t get to have you.
I won’t have to think twice on saying
That I waited a life time to say “I love you”…
I know the moment I will close my eyes I will dream about you ….
I will smile and recall the memories we had …
Then a tear will fell from my eyes …
You know why? ? ?

Because in my dream you will again say goodbye ….
So I have decided to stay awake
And never close my eyes until God takes my breath away
Just like he took my life away.

Love you…..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sadiqullah Khan 03 February 2009

I personally like this poem. There is a lot of conversation within the self and love is expressed too much in detail. It appears that the author wants to talk for a long time to her love. Still she has been able to manage to express her true emotions. Fine rythme here. A 10 from me.

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Catrina Heart 03 February 2009

You have penned a diary my dear.......... Why is it easy to fall in love And yet so hard to be loved back? Why should i feel such if destiny permits me not? Why do i have to fall if its you i can’t have? Why is there a you in me but never a me in you? It is so easy to fall inlove...yes it is true... and yet so hard to be loved back...why? ? ? Because the love you both have is not 'true love'... and he is not the one really meant for you....Man comes and goes to our life, many times to feel a broken heart until such time you'll be able to meet the right man for you...your destiny...some women find their true love early, some late and some are destined to be alone after a long journey of finding true love...Oh! don't find it, it will come to you in God's time......... heartfelt my dear.....10/10

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~ Jon London ~ 03 February 2009

Emotion at its finest...I could hear your heart speak with amazing flow that seems to just ooze from within you........wonderful poetess 10+++++ Best of Health & Happiness Jon

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Ency Bearis 03 February 2009

a wonderful soliloquy...written deep from the heart...emotion in full bloom and thats this made the poem beautiful...10

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Niharika Singh 04 February 2009

a very beautiful poem indeed full of emotions

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Stacey Watts 19 February 2009

I can so feel your pain in this piece. I so stopped breathing myself when I got half way through. Sometimes we find ourselves so in love it is difficult to see into tomorrow. But alas tomorrow does shine a hopeful light. Very well written.

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Love so strong and sentiments sooooooooooo sad. Well written.

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Dr Kamran Haider 11 February 2009

You have really put your heart and soul in this beautiful piece... A little long though but I think one can't stop thoughts flowing like a Nile when it really come through a heart full of love... Well done..

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Anjali Sinha 10 February 2009

wow a really nice poem this touchhhhhhhed me anjali

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C. P. Sharma 09 February 2009

A poem with perfect rhythm and natural flow and love with all its intensity and purity, divine love. Although a long poem but kept me spell bound. CP

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