Valentine Love Song Poem by ENOCH JOHN

Well done- it bears and/or bares a youthful love so intense so wholehearted that it can carry us through many a barren year.

Awfully impressive poem. Really one of the warmest, sweetest poems I've ever heard! Great stuff!

Hi Enoch, I love this piece however I am an idle musician as well and would like perhaps suggest a small change. Although chords can be broken chords and occasionally construct a melody they usually have the function of supporting the melody that at best soars out of the chordal progression. I would modestly present instead of the word Of (Of the melody of your love song) perhaps guiding giving birth to engendering or creating. I love the simple expressiveness of your style. Thanks for sharing, Paul

Soothing and mesmerizing to young and young at hearts, while it can be tantalizing to some. Beautifully crafted. Deserves it's placement. X

So well written poem I really liked it. The song of love well sung.10+++

Your diction is a complete delight. Very powerfully and movingly penned. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

Extremely beautiful love poem with a spirit of celebration. Loved reading this poem. Thanks for sharing. I would like to quote: Plant in my bosom the eternal seed of hope And I'll reap a harvest of fulfilment.

Thanx guys for all the beautiful comments.

Thanx guys for all the wonderful comments.

Fantastically beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.