Utopia Poem by Nyki Thomas

Utopia



There was a man,
That began,
A place like noble Judea
In a godforsaken earth
That did not have much worth
Upon that was built the kingdom of Utopia.

He did as he was told
That knight so brave and bold
Who had a spiritual rebirth
That made him in to gold
The man that angels did foretold
Who would come, to make Utopia

And as his strength did alength
He did form a love
that would stand above
“Lord” said he
“are you with me,
to help me with Utopia? ”

“Yes my brother
And for the others
Down I come to deliver you all
One right after another,
Into the world of Utopia.”

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kyle Carruthers 05 February 2006

I like the use of dialogue to help tell your story. Nicely done.

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