Used To Be Poem by Sara Panicali

Used To Be

Rating: 4.5


We used to be friends
and said we would
be there for each other
til the end
no matter what through
the good and bad

We used to be friends
til you found that girl
and pushed me away
no matter how hard I tried
to stay by your side

We used to be friends
til you said you wanted her
and never wanted to hear
or see me again
you loved her
only a month or so
of knowing her
after almost a year were together
everything we went through
I see how much you don't even care

We used to be friends
til you pushed me away
and now you find
she's in love with another guy
so now I'm okay
and you want me back as a friend

We used to be friends
til you pushed me away
but after the struggle
I went through, by myself
and all the long and lonely nights
I think I woke up
and finally realized
I don't need you anymore
and glad 'we used to be friends'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cat Hodgson 13 November 2011

People come into our life sometimes for just a fleeting time and some for a life time.. I say don't dwell.. find another and make her close.. Good expession.. Cat

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Harindhar Reddy 11 November 2011

There heaven-sent charm in your poems. I like the repetition of Idea even I do the same with my poems. A good poem with great message. Yes once last is last forever! 'We used to be friends til you pushed me away' 10++++++++++++++++++

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 07 November 2011

glad you are over him and i am glad that you can walk with pride after him realizing that you are the more sincere one your poem tells a story of everyone and they will glad you told their story in a poem ten votes for this bravo

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Abdallah Gamal 07 November 2011

Although it seems so sad but the loyalty and sincerity are what drew a beautiful pic. full of passion and love colors. All Sara's poems show a great mean of loyalty and sincerity, they were drawn beautifully by her, and this poem is like my poem ((I'll remain faithful to you whatever you do)) ,

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