Untruths Poem by Susan Lacovara

Untruths

Rating: 4.5


Oh and how true, your troubles remain...
You've hidden your fingerprints
In her long dark mane
Sold all of your secrets
For the price of a tall drink....
What did you really imagine she'd think?

Then polished your brown boots
Arrogance slicked back your hair..
Quickly passing a mirror,
You wished wasn't there...

Rehearsed all your answers to the questions
That fly....
With no place left to run to...and even much more to hide

You gathered your jacket, belt-buckled your blues...
And wished someone else walked in your shoes..
A kiss, one last glance, an 'I'm sorry...so long'
Vanished into the night, where she'd never belong.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(11/15/95) for BC
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
V P Mahur 24 June 2014

Dear Susan, A lovely write with flow of thoughts. Thanks for this nice work and sharing it.

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Khairul Ahsan 06 May 2014

Read this poem again. The last two lines touched me.

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Anthony Burkett 29 January 2014

Speaks to me of a remorseful goodbye

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Danny Draper 28 October 2013

The truth will out, but seeded doubt, will weeds into a garden sprout.

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Khairul Ahsan 05 September 2013

You've hidden your fingerprints In her long dark mane Sold all of your secrets For the price of a tall drink.... What did you really imagine she'd think? Well expressed, liked it.

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