Untouchables Poem by Rachel Butler

Untouchables

Rating: 4.4


(Dedicated to the unknown gardener)


I Begged the sage knowledge from Love, Truth, Principle, Mind and Soul.

It is you, who emphasizes the idea of ownship of ones guilty conscience, for the creation and confusion.

Coquettish, maybe the air, parley not the path.
Indefinite, etiquette and grace, went my peace.

Yearnings as only lovers have power and skill too. Mellifluous waters cascading, intoxicated, we drink each others,
Swell.


Sparrow

Monday, October 24, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: happiness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 24 October 2011

Like this good poem. Good write.

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Abhishek Tiwari 25 October 2011

nice poem... and of course the title of the poem takes it to the new dimensions! ! ! !

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Ency Bearis 26 October 2011

Awesome poem, with remarkable wisdom.

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Bernard Snyder 27 October 2011

Intellectually written poem Rachel! Thanks for sharing such lovely work!

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Sally Plumb Plumb 28 October 2011

A flowing piece.

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Geetha Jayakumar 01 August 2016

Beautiful write painted with different colors. Loved reading it.

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Raymond Farrell 06 February 2016

honest to God, Rachel you are indeed a good poet and this poem is very poignant and thought provoking.

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Renu Kakkar 30 September 2015

A thought provoking poem

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Hazel Durham 21 August 2015

Beautiful imagery Rachel, packed with wisdom and thought provoking!

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Kee Thampi 15 November 2011

learnings as only lovers have power and skill too. Mellifluous waters cascading, intoxicated, we drink each others, Swell.

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