Untouchable Beauty Poem by Elena Sandu

Untouchable Beauty

Rating: 5.0


Step out... Keep away
from me.
Said the beautiful doll
in the glass case...
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-I.......... Am............. Dust......... Free.......


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Don't try your hands on me.
Not even in your dream.


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The glass case, dust free,
kept the beautiful doll.

...End of she....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 03 November 2012

Unique style and presented in very original way..and the meaning is more authentic..very well done Elena_Soul

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Hamid Negah 31 October 2012

Elena, You have strong feeling with short poem...well done.

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Aung Si 31 October 2012

Wow! wonderful, fantastic and breathtaking style and awesome fashion.Well done! !

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Wabi Sabi 30 October 2012

someone said, , , if you have not been sick, you wouldn't been able to understand how difficult being sick is. I think this can be compared to any kinds of people's difficulty, meaning that being dust free is like people free and life free. I hope no one is like that.

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