(untitled) Poem by Odnalor Tines

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Rating: 5.0


I like you to touch my skin
Slice me with tormenting pain
Before I sleep in darkness
I want to feel your sharpness

Wednesday, December 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: object
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is a tanaga, a type of Filipino poem which consists of four lines with seven syllables each with the same rhyme at the end of each line - - that is to say a 7-7-7-7 Syllabic verse, with an AABB rhyme scheme. It is untitled. The reader guesses or provides its title.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jesus Diaz Llorico 30 December 2015

Excellent write, a true poetry rated 10+

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