Until Your Kiss Poem by Barry Middleton

Until Your Kiss



I swear to this
I could not see
until your kiss
awakened me

I could not see
until your touch
awakened me
for love is such

until your touch
I was so blind
for love is such
I was resigned

I was so blind
I swear to this
I was resigned
until your kiss

Saturday, January 30, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Barry Middleton 30 January 2016

This is my first attempt at a pantoum. I was not sure if a two beat line was appropriate but I like this little poem whether or not it is technically correct.

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