Until You Come! Poem by Qistina Zaini

Until You Come!

Rating: 5.0


I never had a friend
Until you come into my life
I never had joy
Until you show me how
I never love math
Until you tell me math is fun
I never love study
Until you tell me, study is important
I never had a dream come true
Until the day I founding you
And
I never being loved
Until you tell me that, you love me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Peter A. Crowther 13 October 2006

Nice well constructed poem building up to a peak. The two repetitive line beginnings work well too. Keep 'em coming!

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