Until We Fell Poem by Robin Bennett

Until We Fell

Rating: 5.0


When I remember you
I think of us drunk-
sipping from pineapples
and paper umbrellas
at the shore-

The wind whispered fury-
with her salty breath
attacking sand dunes
and spreading secrets

When the sunset-
married the horizon
the tide changed
with the pesky moon

Dying messages carved
in the sand vanished-
with the ebb and flow
reminding us love-
is fleeting

We loved under
the stars for a-
lifetime
until we
danced off-
the face of
the earth

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Green 31 July 2012

A wonderful poem :) ................

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Deo Inji 27 July 2012

I like the way you personified the wind whispering & spreading secrets, and also the sunset marrying the horizon, painting vivid imagery in virtually every line...Nice one poet!

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Lynn Stillman 26 July 2012

Robin, you have penned another beautiful poem.Your words have the power to make the reader see every image and feel every emotion. Your talent is amazing. Lynn Stillman

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Hi! U r playing the imagination with words as if playing with pebbles, great. u r going to surpass greater more poets. with love subrat do u remember

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Rick Elpers 25 July 2012

Great imagery. Paints a vivid picture. I like it.

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Robin Bennett

Robin Bennett

New Orleans, La USA
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