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Unsolved Mystery

Does the past have an ego?
Dig up all your skeletons and let me know

A blank tape with nothing but white lies
Your flawless ambition is seen through idle eyes
A heavy cloud raging across the waters
A father dancing with his daughters
A man is not man alone
Unless he chooses to act on his own
What may be relevant today
May be gone tomorrow anyway

Does the past have an ego?
Are you a friend or a foe?

Tied to a balloon is an endless note
A wooden boat remains afloat
Heaven is lost somewhere in this misconception
A wind without caution
Could go any direction

Dear God! who killed the messenger?
Are you the suspecting passenger?
How dare you riddle me speechless
How dare you become my weakness

At the end of the day
I shall lay my head in dismay
And sigh
Until the roses die

Submitted: Saturday, February 08, 2014
Edited: Friday, March 21, 2014


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  • Geetha Jayakumar (2/12/2014 10:52:00 AM)

    A fantastic write. Loved the lines...
    A wind without caution
    Could go any direction..Very true said...
    I loved reading each line and each lines conveys a different message. Thank you for this wonderful poem.

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  • Ed Nigma (2/10/2014 3:55:00 PM)

    YOU should definitely be in the top 500 poets and I mean that! The poems you write are so rich, colorful, though provoking and full of wisdom. These are the type of poems that you can read and gather something new from each read every time. This is a brilliant piece of work and I thank you for sharing! ! Allan Gerard~

  • Efe Benjamin (2/9/2014 8:01:00 AM)

    Great piece, captivating...

  • S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (2/9/2014 12:44:00 AM)

    A fascinating ethereal poem with subliminal muses. Crafted in an aweinspiring style. Im not sure if that's what u intended but to me it reaffirms divinity. Take care.

  • Sandra Feldman (2/8/2014 4:37:00 PM)

    Fantastic poem, in its surrealistic mystery and its victorious beauty and style.
    Your roses will Not die

  • Neela Nath (2/8/2014 4:28:00 AM)

    For whom you write? This question makes me curious.So lovely is your love that I envy.Ha ha joking.A fab write B.V.

  • Gary Kedron (2/8/2014 1:26:00 AM)

    WOW.... I FRECKIN LOVE THIS! ! !
    What a beautiful WRITE..... AS ALWAYS! ! ! !
    :))

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