Unseen Wemen Poem by Pirate Love Magic Man
Unseen Wemen
Men what have we done?
Working every day away with no time to play
Feeling tired and wore out at the end
Our minds too frustraded to desend
On our unforseen wemen
Leaving them longing and forgoten
In thier eyes they replay over and over
The first date, the bubble bath we ran
Candle light dinner with pop corn on the plate
Missing those gum wrapper love notes
Dreaming of fantasy runaways on make believe boats
Then we find out about a long distance friend
That fills this yurning, we get jealouse, mad and shun
Never talking and learning we just take away thier fun
MEN WHAT HAVE WE DONE?
I love this it is so true.. I think you are truly talented...... Be well.
Ahh interesting...i wonder who the inspiration was for this poem ^_^ anyways i love it. You are such a good author ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ -Tess
Wise words in hard times. Some men still at least go home only to their wives & some wives treasure that, but... romance is so rare & that's so sad
'Men what have we done? ' well, i would like to answer that but i am not man! ! ! very well done....10 Hataw
Fantastically written my dear friend. good men like you and so many others are really to hard on your selfs. I really enjoyed reaing this... very well done. good job. Becca
do u mean unseen women? and u have a lot of corrections to be made. ha ha ha...I got ink on my hands. I writing a new poem...the title is 'autumn love', you should get ur eyes on it as soon as u find out it's posted. ha ha ha...sorry I can not stop laughing at what ur poem made me think of...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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I love this... The sentiment is awsome. Well done! ! !