Unsaid Poem by Ocean MisT

Unsaid

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Its been four years
when we first met each other
we filled the days of laughter
and face the change together

We saw the downfall of tears
the light of shining dreams
the smile in every scene
a bond as strong as steel

We caught the stars in shine
we reach the mountains high
but as the time flows by
we find it hard to say goodbye

If river departs the sea
and leaves departs its tree
I can not stand to see
when I departs we

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

i like this line.. 'If river departs the sea and leaves departs its tree I can not stand to see when I departs we ' it's really dramatic!

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Cheneth Jane San Diego 27 June 2008

love this poem especially the last line

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