Unpleasant Echo - Senryu Poem by Ibnu Din Assingkiri
Unpleasant Echo - Senryu
Rating: ★5.0
You sounded like flies
in a big bottle half full
searching for exit.
Thursday, October 24, 2013
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don't be part of problem - be part of solution.
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Unwritten Soul
27 October 2013
Nyeeeeet...................sound of the mosquitoes or flies...annoying sound... I like the idea of this, it maybe a small sound but it disturbing my sweet dream :) Loved it_Soul
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4/19/2024 1:17:16 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Though a minor phenomenon but dealt interestingly(some say it's humming is like music :)