Unperceived Poem by Issam Aladdin

Unperceived

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Its the idea of speaking without talking
of dancing without moving
of celebrating without laughing
...of intranquility

Its the idea of running without sweating
of fearing without trembling
of seeing without staring
...of immobility

Its the idea of drinking without swallowing
of eating without tasting
of touching without feeling
...of numbness

Its the idea of stretching without flexing
of loathing without hating
of loving without taking
...of calmness

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I can relate to this well as the thoughts are familiar to me. Keep it up, ! Ez.

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Joseph Daly 21 April 2008

I like this and the use of a word such as 'intranquility'. The structure of this is really great. The narrative doesn't appeal to me personally, but that is unimportant. I like that you show a good grasp of thing and that you are serios. Thanks Mate!

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