Unnoticed (Waltz Wave) Poem by ray Schreiber

Unnoticed (Waltz Wave)



She
didn't
call
today
unnoticed
the tone
that
didn't
play her song
imagining
I didn't
hear it
when
it came
unnoticed
today
she
didn't
call.

ray Schreiber
Tuesday, November 3, 2009
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Lillian Thomas 04 November 2009

This is superb use of waltz wave, having it circle back on itself; the repetition of words reminds the reader o the ring tone that is absent.

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Ying Escalona 03 November 2009

short, slim and filled with meanings

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