Unknown Little Entry! Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Unknown Little Entry!

Rating: 4.8


Heard a knock behind my head!
Little Mickey Mouse entered my house of brain.
Waited for no permission
Pushing me aside, It just entered as if its own house.
In a minute it vanished into thin air
It tasted all my dishes kept in dining table
It teased me with cute little smile.
I ran behind it.
Within minutes the house ran into mess.
But it escaped from my clutches
Now all my dishes went down to bin.
Oh my dear Mickey
Why did you keep us all hungry

It was not the mere the entry of the just little Mickey mouse
But entry of hatred and anger too in my life.
Little one irritated me with its behaviour.

Everyday you come up with some new ideas to hit me.
I feel I am standing in cricket stadium like a batsman
Not sure whether you are a spinner or a fast bowler
I am not sure what I am going to hit whether sixes or singles.
If I hit the boundary
That means you are out of my boundary.

Now I bought a mousetrap
Mickey was too wise to fall on it.
It never got tempted to cheese kept inside
But except that one
It went on eating my brain as it find tastier than cheese.
Oh dear Mickey, you just increased my B.P.
You had thrown me out of gear
You kept my brain irritated with anger and tempting fear.

How to throw you out remained a puzzle to me!


©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 03 February 2014

A great poem life can be a puzzle sometimes.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 03 February 2014

There are many Mickey puzzles in life that irritate us. Poem presents this nicely. Thank you.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 03 February 2014

Mind itself a mystery, allows subtle things in infinite numbers to enter and sting like little Mickey Mouse......Geetha .....but he is not to be allowed to rule over the brain in its groove............nicely composed.......

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Khairul Ahsan 27 February 2014

A poem of humor and reality. The little creatures can be very menacing, but they too have a right to live. Enjoyed very much, all the readers' comments, particularly those of Valsa George and Ed Nigma.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 February 2014

Why did you keep us all hungry.. LOVELY POEM. NICE CHASE////10 HAD WE BEEN MOUSE, THIS WOULD HAVE BEEN NICE HOUSE NICE TO DRINK AND FEEL MERRY

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Babatunde Aremu 05 February 2014

What a puzzle! You really amused me. I just keep imaging the scenario. Good job!

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Lyn Paul 05 February 2014

You have made me smile with this write. Full of strong messages and you know about cricket. Always words from deep inside your heart and mind. Thankyou.

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Valsa George 04 February 2014

These tiny rodents can drive us crazy and steal even our sleep. Yes, they are so tricky and clever enough to evade the mouse trap! But never let anything eat your brain! Poetry and great ideas are stored up there! Beware of the gnawing bites! !

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