Unknown Enemy Poem by sekharan pookkat

Unknown Enemy

Rating: 5.0


My mouth is sealed
With black cloth
And hands are tied
With long tug

Unknown enemy
Cut my wings of thought
And expelled my Queen
From her dream land

Her paintings abanded
Her virtues loitered
Assets plundered
Which she kept precious

Oh! God he cut my throat
And put me in darkness
Like an unknown enemy
Of destitute again

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 17 June 2013

unknown enemy, good poem, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Payal Parande 17 June 2013

this piece is so wonderful i felt that terror and the scare....brilliant piece indeed

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Farah Ilyas 18 June 2013

oh my God, ur poem is too scary, dreadful poem..ahhh

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Survi Sharma 18 June 2013

powerfully written daring and charming one liked a lot

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V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 01 April 2016

Like reading a thriller, best work, thanks poet

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Heather Wilkins 23 July 2013

oh that unknown enemy. is always trying to hurt. push him aside and continue on yur journey.

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Poetheart Morgan 27 June 2013

He is in the shadows, lurking, trying to hurt the love of the poet. But he does not know that she is strong for her and for him. beautiful! ! !

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Godfrey Morris 22 June 2013

This is well written. Please continue writing

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Soumita Sarkar 19 June 2013

a write of horror............Keep writing........

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