Unknown Emotions Poem by Jessie Jett

Unknown Emotions

Rating: 5.0


It's the worst,
when you feel unwanted.
Abandoned.

Like nobody,
really wants you.
Alone.

To make scars,
to reveal truth.
Pain.

Only try to take it away.
To lose everything.
Sad.

Endure again and again.
Wondering, if it's me.
Defeated.

Can't do anything,
except with time.
Scared.

To love, to feel lost.
Abandoned again.
Hopeless.

Unwanted, unsure.
Another piece breaks off.
Heart broken.

But it can't.
It dosen't stop you.
Faith.

Hold it all out,
in the palm of your hand.
Bravery.

To be all this,
to want to try.
Ambitious.

Through this.
Can do this.
Encouragement.

For yourself,
for your love;
endures.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 11 April 2012

Beauty and Talent are delicately filtered through this well crafted and heart touching write that clearly shows striking writing skills! This amazing write is full of penning and rich imagery! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! I really enjoyed this read! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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Unwritten Soul 11 April 2012

Unknown Emotion but you tell like you are the founder of these feelings, full in description but i understand we know this emotions but it hard to tell as it come mysteriously in sudden time.You make a good poem, well presentation, great idea and what i can say you got talent..keep inking papers with thought! _Unwritten Soul

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Dead Leaf 11 April 2012

nice....i like this sanu

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Rajendran Muthiah 11 April 2012

Feelings of abandonment, loneliness, pain, bravery, sadness, endurance, encouragement, ambition, faith, disappointment., hopelessness, scare, defeat....you have involved several emotions in love. Wonderful.

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