Unknown Destination Poem by ramesh rai

Unknown Destination

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Marching towards an unknown destination
I don't know, what is the end?
And when my journey will stop
I have lost my origin from where
I started campaigning, can not be
back to my original status.

My all footprints have been erased
by the wave of time like a traveller
of desert whose footprints are washed out
by the hotwind; but following mirage
I know chasing the mirage of life
I have to be tired and make me asleep
my body will be burried alive
by the sand of desert, but my soul
will not stop, it shall leave my body
will be marching to an eternal destination.

Sunday, September 14, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: journey
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by poem of Poetess Khalida Bano Ali of Pakistan. Poem title - Tanhai
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khalida Bano Ali 14 September 2014

my body will be burried alive by the sand of desert, but my soul will not stop, it shall leave my body will be marching to an eternal destination. Nice thoughts and firm determination.

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* Sunprincess * 14 September 2014

...............very nice......sure this must be a great destination....

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Valsa George 22 September 2014

'All my footprints are erased and now I am chasing the mirage'......! This is an experience most of us share! We do not know where we are heading to, but are sure, our soul marches to a definite destination! Great write!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 20 September 2014

Soul marches to eternal destination. Nice thought to live for. Thank you.

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 15 September 2014

Hello poet Ramesh I enjoyed this very interesting poem. I want to thank you for reading my piece, A Friend Like You. Loyd

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Gajanan Mishra 15 September 2014

eternal destination, it is for all. thanks.

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Akhtar Jawad 15 September 2014

Ramesh Rai is a thinker, his poems are full of thoughts, God has bestowed upon him with magic of description. I shall read the poem Tanhai once again.

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