wabi sabi

Rookie - 138 Points (1973/07/13 / tokyo)

Universally


An Old Pond
petals spread all-round
form at random
whirling by heat
spread by wind again
deform into something new by nature

universal kaleidoscope

Submitted: Sunday, November 25, 2012
Edited: Monday, November 26, 2012

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,958 Points Ken E Hall (12/6/2012 3:35:00 AM)

    You picture nature as it is with its timeless beauty in many things as you say so fitting...universal kaleidoscope
    thanks and regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Nader Baheri (11/26/2012 9:02:00 AM)

    by the lapse of time the human will be deformed like the beautiful petal maybe to a developed and more clever human.who knows? ?
    best wishes~nb (Report) Reply

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