Union Poem by Vivek Haldar

Union

Rating: 4.9


No, I won't call you by my voice
I will call you through my Soul and bring you near
How can this union be brought about?
As Jamuna enters into the Ganges?
The music enters and leaves
But leaves its imprints of hope behind
When the earth is parched with drought
What good is one cup of water?
Won't the Clouds be drawn by its thirst
and won't the rain then fall on to the dry earth?
But, Who listens to your words O! Poet?
as, She is long dead now!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 15 September 2011

Melted vapor and freezing, like a water i feel the words you have brought here in such interesting craft..Union is unique poem, keep writing and thanks for inviting :) _Unwritten Soul

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Tsira Gogeshvili 15 September 2011

Wonderfully...10.... Best wishes, Tsira

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Vipins Puthooran 15 September 2011

So nice poem.. But the las line it touched my soul.top marks for you

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Alondra Gonzalez 21 September 2011

10... love it! ! ! i love ur writing

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Marlene Rashidi 17 September 2011

So creative, Well written! !

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Eric Cockrell 16 September 2011

haunting, the call of the mystical... well done!

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Aranthabailu Ummar 16 September 2011

the union will happen the union of rever and union of life is entirly different. We know you cannot make it sound. Ur call from the soul is a matter of love. U shuld give to those who beg it for that the time wll come.

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Matt Mooney 16 September 2011

I like your poem.The union of the two great rivers is dramatic.We have a great song here called 'The Meeting of the Waters' about such a phenomena.

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