Unintentional Pain Poem by Lyn Paul

Unintentional Pain

Rating: 4.7


Hurting
Hurting so bad
So many...
Suffering.
Made the wrong decision
The wrong choice
Now...
Too late
Can't turn back
One simple action
Now tragic
Unintentional pain
Never..
Never Too heal
Please Forgive
I feel your pain
I ache
The world aches
Unintentional
Gone wrong
Hurting;
Hurting Forever
So... So... Sorry
Please Forgive




Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL

Unintentional Pain
Friday, December 14, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: death,pain,radio,royalty,suicide
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
How quickly life can change. There was so much sadness for the Nurse who took her own life in London for the Royal Prank. So So sad that she felt that she could no longer go on.Incredibly hard for her family. Here in Australia it was also very sad to see the 2 DJ's who made that call. Never to consider a simple prank could lead to the taking of a life who was there to save others.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
So Close 14 December 2012

feelings poured......really superb friend, so emotional i really loved it... nice work! »so close«

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Red O'mara 14 December 2012

We all deserve to feel this way. Seems you really do. For most, our own problems seem far more immediate. Like your view of it.

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Owain Glyn 15 December 2012

If we didn't regret we wouldn't be feeling at all.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 15 December 2012

it takes a second to start a mistake, but it takes years, sometimes decade to solve it!

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Maria Gonzalez 27 September 2015

Very poetic. So precise are your expressions. Beautifully done.

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Tony Karas 28 December 2012

Such intense pain... (((hug))) It's never too late until they bury you.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 25 December 2012

The deep feelings from the core of your heart have flown in the form of this beautiful write.Let us not mind the hurt.We'll learn to forget and forgive.! Merry Christmas and A Happy New Year!

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Mark Dillon 18 December 2012

So well written, mistakes are made by all and feeling the pain from their consequences allows us to learn from them and move on and try to do things better, thats life.

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Unwritten Soul 16 December 2012

Yes i completely understand this, and how much then we bear the pain that unintentionally introduced to others or to us...yet forgiveness and understanding is only a treatment to soothe a condition, at least_Soul

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