Undreamt Dream Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

Undreamt Dream

Rating: 5.0


I felt like swinging on moon
Like playing drums on moon
And even sleeping on its bed
While playing with stars around

Felt like painting the dark sky
With shining and falling stars
Along with a glowing moon
While dipping my brush in sun

Felt like filling up the dry seas
Placing back the fallen leafs
And refreshing withered flowers
While digging wells in hot deserts

I felt it while my tooth are in jar
My ears in rack and eyes on table
And legs standing beside my bed
While I'm resting sound like a baby

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajaram Ramachandran 27 December 2009

What is not possible in the waking stage, that can be made possible in one's dreanland.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 27 December 2009

words very well expressed. it flowed fluently.

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Louis Rams 28 December 2009

LIKE THE SONG: TO DREAM THE BEAUTIFUL DREAM, TO FIGHT THE UNBEATABLE FOE. SO IS YOUR POEM.

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Antonio Liao 28 December 2009

i like and love it....such a resting poem i ever read....so alluring in thought and spirited move of gladnesss... God bless a 10 +++++

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Marieta Maglas 28 December 2009

Felt like painting the dark sky With shining and falling stars Along with a glowing moon wonderful meditative poem, beautiful moment of symbolic fusion between human being and nature 10++++++++++

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Eyan Desir 27 December 2009

A well writtten poem good job........

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Janell Cressman 27 December 2009

i don't really know what to say, it is a brillint piece,

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