Under Your Spell Poem by laurajayne Kennedy

Under Your Spell

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under your spell
thats where you have me
anything you want
within reality.

i didnt notice
how you did it
i didnt asky why
didnt want to understand it.

under your spell
from the moment i saw you
its the only way to explain
my obsession with you.

you cast ypur spell
im yours forever
this spell you cast
will hold our love togeether.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Tyler 11 October 2005

There is often a thin line between love and something darker. You tread very well on that line. Being in love removes any rational behaviour, making you do things quite out of character, and it is something as you rightly say, is beyond our understanding. I love the deceptive simplicity here. Fantastic. Regards, Daniel Tyler

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