Valerie Dohren

Gold Star - 4,717 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

Under The Laburnum Tree - Poem by Valerie Dohren

(A simple tale)

Under the Laburnum tree
She saw his gentle face
Under the Laburnum tree
She knew their first embrace

Under the Laburnum tree
She gave to him her love
Under the Laburnum tree
Beneath the stars above

Under the Laburnum tree
He left her there to cry
Under the Laburnum tree
That`s where she chose to die

(Under the Laburnum tree
Were scattered all its seeds
Under the Laburnum tree
Amongst the growing weeds)

Under the Laburnum tree
The moon was shining bright
Under the Laburnum tree
Her silv`ry soul took flight

Under the Laburnum tree
At last she was set free
Under the Laburnum tree
She found eternity

Comments about Under The Laburnum Tree by Valerie Dohren

  • Rookie - 112 Points Robert Beck (10/28/2012 12:47:00 AM)

    A tree as beautiful as your lovely poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 36,824 Points * Sunprincess * (9/27/2012 9:31:00 AM)

    wow, so impressive and I love your muse.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,536 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (4/14/2012 3:01:00 AM)

    A touching write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 316 Points Richard D. Remler (4/13/2012 4:35:00 PM)

    Oh the tales these trees could tell if we knew how to listen. A beautiful but sad poem. penned with skill. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,125 Points Saiom Shriver (4/5/2012 7:33:00 PM)

    released from the bars of the rib cage
    ... a beautiful and powerful poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 481 Points Danny Draper (3/18/2012 8:26:00 AM)

    Unrequited love, sad but released to hopefully the sanctuary of a more loving garden. A lovely poem. Which species of Laburnum, L chinese? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Karen Deeks (3/18/2012 3:13:00 AM)

    A beautiful passage through, time love and life experiences in a place chosen for it's relevance for she... Lovely piece Val.... Thanks Karen (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 224 Points Robert Green (3/17/2012 5:58:00 PM)

    as always Val, a great write, a great poem :) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,112 Points Diane Hine (3/16/2012 7:00:00 PM)

    This probably sounds nuts, but I just sang this lovely poem to myself. Someone should write a beautiful melody to accompany it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 16, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, March 30, 2012

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