Adam M. Snow

Freshman - 660 Points (5/30/1988 / Phoenix, AZ)

Under The Innocent Sky - Poem by Adam M. Snow

Under the innocent sky,
ever serene and fair.
Beauty is the stars on high,
taking away our despair.

Ever so silent it can be,
with still a melody that can be heard.
Close your eyes imagine free,
with wings stretched wide, like a morning bird.

Soaring through the dark blue sky,
ever serene and fair;
joining with the stars on high,
feeling the wind between your hair.

Even though the dream's not true,
we can still admire from afar,
the beauty the sky, so dark and blue,
and the many dancing stars.

Comments about Under The Innocent Sky by Adam M. Snow

  • Gold Star - 28,915 Points Kim Barney (12/25/2014 6:46:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem, one of the best I've read all day. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 343 Points F. J. Thomas (7/31/2014 1:04:00 PM)

    The night is quite a peaceful time; beautiful Adam. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,208 Points Khairul Ahsan (7/9/2013 10:35:00 AM)

    Good rhyme, nice thoughts.
    Close your eyes imagine free,
    with wings stretched wide, like a morning bird..... Nice way to unwind oneself. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 70,270 Points Gajanan Mishra (6/29/2013 8:59:00 PM)

    very fine poem, I like it, thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 94 Points Aman Arora (6/29/2013 8:36:00 PM)

    nice feel good poem
    loved the last 4 lines especially (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 29, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 25, 2013

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