Under The Bridge Poem by Ray Lucero

Under The Bridge

Rating: 5.0


He walks through dark woods in quiet of night,
As bats and barn owls launch into flight

Crickets and frogs beginning to prattle,
Swarming mosquito’s prepare for battle

Night sounds humming a haunting refrain,
Clouds above darken, begins a soft rain

He zips up his jacket, turns up torn collar,
Curses Goodwill jacket that cost but a dollar

A trickle of water runs down his bare neck,
Shuddering, chilled…'My life’s such a wreck'

No money, prospects, no one that cares,
Walks unfriendly streets, ignoring cold stares

How long has it been since he left home, fled?
10 years have gone by without a real bed

Raging Step-Father hurt him in more ways than one,
Treated more like a dog than respected Step-Son

“Some day he'll answer for sins against me, ”
“Excuses won’t help, there will be no place to flee'

Shuddering again, he treads toward the bridge,
A short distance ahead just over a ridge

At long last he’s made it to safety again,
“My shelter, my haven, my best friend”

He gathers dry kindling, gropes for a match,
Patiently waits for a small flame to catch

Campfire roaring, wet clothes will soon dry,
Twists off wine screw-top, it’s time to get high

ROTMS

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bonnie Harding 27 July 2007

This brought back memories of growing up in the city.We've all seen them and I often found myself wondering who they are and how they ended up so alone.A very nice poem, so sad but true...

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Moya Levy 25 March 2006

Ah this is sad Ray, left me with an upsidedown smile. Moyax

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Mary Nagy 24 March 2006

What a sad poem.........yet this is so common today. It breaks my heart to think people actually live like this. What a shame that there aren't enough people helping them. Powerful poem Ray. Sincerely, Mary

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Shannon Chapel 05 December 2005

Ray, I LOVE this poem! Well done. I recently wrote one similar to it called 'The Drifter' inspired by my recent trip to San Francisco. Makes me sad. S

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Donna Nimmo 30 November 2005

A truely wonderful poem. I really liked it alot. It told a story and you are really gifted with words. Sincerely Yours, Donna

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