Unconditional Love Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Unconditional Love

Rating: 4.6


A Joyous hymn a Joyful time
To be Compassionate and Sublime
A Blessed rain a Blissful year
To be Content and Dear
A Disciple and a Goal
To be Single and the Whole
A Beloved and a Lover
To be Shelter and the Cover
I have learnt those
From the mothers
My heart beats
Unconditionally
For others

(2008/6/8)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Jon London ~ 09 June 2008

Beautifully expressed....Your creations bring light to so many my friend.. Hope you've got plenty of that golden ink you write with left best wishes Jon

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Thad Wilk 09 June 2008

Another gem here, unconditional love what more can one give or want! *10*! ! A delightful poem! ! Best regards! Friend Thad

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 09 June 2008

let me be the umbrella... the rain... the mountain... the river... the sun... the home... the garden... in your dome

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Tsira Goge 09 June 2008

I very much like these surprising metaphors, the Nightingale ...10... Tsira

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Rani Turton 09 June 2008

The line I liked the most: 'I have learnt those from mothers'. Thanks for the spirit of generosity in this poem.

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Shashendra Amalshan 29 July 2009

this again is filled with emotions indeed.. and liked the fast paced style of yours good.. with love shan

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Emma Adamyan 06 July 2009

its so wholly as sth created by God

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M M 10 June 2008

Unconditional love embracing everyone, a great idea. The poehm as an interesting inner flow which creates unity of the 'opposite', like Unconditional Love. 'To be Content and Dear A Disciple and a Goal To be Single and the Whole ' A very fine write! 10

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Onelia Avelar 09 June 2008

... unconditional love learned by mothers is perfectly nailed and the poem is flowing well penned - joyous and joyful / blessed and blissful - lovely play with words.

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... ... 09 June 2008

Very beautiful! I love the rhyme in it! Proud of you!

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