Life Or Death Poetry


Uncertain Good Wishes - Poem by Life Or Death Poetry

You are very hurt
I know and I see it
I understand and I am sorry
I wish I could do a right
I want you to see
That I really do care
I am just so stupid
I understand if you
Think I am crap
I just want to maybe
Let me prove your worth to me
But I am not sure how
I am kind of going of
A lot of uncertainty
But I want to try
And all I ask is for a chance
But I not sure where to start
Exactly..


Poet's Notes about The Poem

I did wrong.. I understand if you think i am a compleate horrible heartless person.. and i have to say sadley i agree.. That i did this.. nomadder how or why.. I was selfish and I just want to prove myself and maybe gain your respect again.. I am just not sure how to begin.. and I need to know.. Will you give me a chance? please.. or you can always give me a chance if and when you are ready.. I am sorry..

Comments about Uncertain Good Wishes by Life Or Death Poetry

  • Gold Star - 18,460 Points Ramesh Rai (6/28/2013 8:23:00 PM)

    But I want to try
    And all I ask is for a chance
    But I not sure where to start
    Exactly..
    very simple writing which i like most n also a broad vision (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 5,308 Points Patricia Grantham (6/26/2013 7:19:00 AM)

    Life sometimes deals us some terrible things.
    We just have to wade through the mud and then
    get up and wash ourselves off. A thoughtful
    write. I invite you to read my poem Be encouraged. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,844 Points Wahab Abdul (6/5/2013 12:40:00 AM)

    really a heart felt poem... i understand and enjoyed it... keep going (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Life Or Death Poetry (5/28/2013 5:14:00 PM)

    I am not sure how I can either.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Life Or Death Poetry (5/28/2013 5:13:00 PM)

    or give me a chance never.. I just feel really bad.. and I want to do somthing right.. I want you to see that i am real i guess.. But it is really up to you.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 28, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 29, 2013


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