Unbreakable Love Poem by Tareq Jalabi

LET US GO OUT..and find a part..to live with a heart..where nothing can make it in two 'part'...................fantasticcccccccccc.

very well done. i like it. its awesome. keep up the good work.

I find it funny how you can be 1,000 miles away from someone and still love them, but anyways I absolutely love this poem.

wow i love it! so true i love it lol. thx 4 sharing.

Good write, Blue Eyes...natural rhyming with sweet rhythm inside...well formatted lines...thanks...10

This is a sweet poem. The first stanza was especially good. The only poor part was the last line. The ending of the poem. Your poem had good rhythm and rhyme, but the last line was a bit weak. Sort of so so. Perhaps, there may have been a better line, but I can't think of one myself. I would keep trying though if I were you. Still, a beautiful poem. GW62

wonderful words...beautifully thoughts in it.... endless love....true love...great love doesnt wither even though long drought of will come 10+++

This poem has a really strong meaning. I love the way you say 'they separated our bodies but not our heart'. Well done! Karin Anderson

i so love this poem it shows real love that can never be broken......i was so touched by it........thanks a lot for sharing